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Friday, October 16, 2009


It was the year 2322 by Mars standard calendar. Prime Minister Sakki Frederick strolled casually into the upper balcony of Folcon dome capital senate house. He lowered his hands to grip the cold railings. It was night again on planet Mars, in the region of Zylat. The buildings that made up the city were a brilliance of multiple points of light in the darkness. High above hung the dome’s shimmering fields.

Prime Minister Sakki had read history, so he knew much about humanity’s original world, planet Earth. He knew that back then on Earth humanity had thought it considerably difficult, to maintain a habitable colony on the red planet. But here they were today. Twenty centuries, according to the data archives.

For twenty centuries they had managed to thrive on the unfriendly world. Sakki read in those piles of history books that life on Earth when compared to Mars in its earlier years of human colonization, could be equaled to the contrasts of heaven and hell.

Perhaps it was such habitable indulgence that drove the people of those times to get complacent. The achievements that had been realized on Mars so far were referred to by historians as quantum leaps of progress in relative time-management evaluation.

So it could easily be concluded that a comet impact that brought with it a noxious gas to wipe out every life on humanity’s original world rendering it uninhabitable, on the other hand, also helped humanity think faster. At least fast enough to have predicted and prepared for it, to an extent. Not many human beings survived the catastrophe, but today two thousand years later, humanity had produced numerous offspring, and was carrying on.

Even when he was alone, Prime Minister Sakki was not the kind that showed a smile when he was excited or happy. Not a mannerism he was born with, but rather one he came to adapt to. He sent his constantly grim face above the tall buildings of Folcon dome...a smile hung in the veil of his mind as he did, for that was the one place he felt free to smile.

The dome’s artificial magnetic field that also served as an active solar receptor and regulator was partly translucent. The vibrant orange gleam shimmered brighter at night. Folcon dome was one of the largest dome habitats on Mars among thousands of others distributed to various parts of the planet.

The long conceived idea of planet-wide terraforming had failed but the Martian Science Conglomerate was currently working on an atmosphere processor that would treat not just the inside of a dome but the entire planet. Men like Minister Sakki hoped they would live to witness such an achievement.

Sakki was a happy man on this day but there were things that had saddened him until now. There would have been more domes because Martian colonist population was constantly on the increase, but the dreadful and ever threatening sundka virus was spreading and leaving death counts in its path at an alarming rate.

It had completed two decades since the terrifying disease was first discovered. And in those twenty years a possible cure had completely eluded Martian scientists and medical experts. No one accurately understood the Martian virus’s pattern.

A quick flash of memory flared in Minister Sakki’s mind. His only brother Nikatta, on a sick bed in a medical house of Varea dome. His body was covered in green boils and he bled from every possible opening of his body; nose, ears, eyes, all over. His death had been slow and painful. The medical experts tried everything possible but the S virus eventually took it had taken many others at the time.

That had been six years back. Right now Nikatta was part of history, and Sakki had to let go of such memories. His major concern in present times, and as the number one leader of the United Martian Government, was the survival of humanity as a whole.

The S virus threatened the very survival of the human race. A decade and half ago the Martian medical team had thought they could contain the disease, but now sundka was showing humanity that it was an unyielding powerful force.

The only option, and the best option now that everything else had been attempted, was the possibility of another habitable planet. Sakki leveled a sterner gaze at the brightly dazzling fields.

That was the thought that caused him to smile in his mind. Captain Peterson Everson of Taurion Fleet two of the United Martian Navy was on his way back from a promising journey into distant space.

Sakki could not wait for Peterson and all the brave men that went with him to return home with the good news. For over ten years they had scoured the far reaches of space in search of a safe haven, now it had finally happened.

Even though hyper-spatial drives were invented many years back, it was in these times that it had finally proved its saving purpose. At first, the main involvement of the Martian Spacing Union upon the founding of hyper-space travel had been the search for alien life...until the S virus emerged.

It was when the virus lingered for more than half a decade that Operation Planet Seeker was initiated by the Spacing Union. The United Martian Navy also offered their best ships in regard to the same mission; and as fate had it, the Navy having been involved in the search for as little as three years, had found a viable habitat.

Prime Minister Sakki Frederick yawned widely, after which he felt the heaviness of his eyes. Even though the excitement would not allow him, he had to get some sleep against tomorrow. Tomorrow was the big day...hopefully.

The message via COMM was not very clear and was roughed with static, so tomorrow he hoped to get better details of the discovery. Sakki turned and retired into his private quarters with another yawn.

"INVADER" Chapter One


Ionarc, fourth Linker class cruiser of the United Martian Navy, lit the blackness of space with a trail of propulsion gases as it roared its course in great speed.

Captain Peterson sat atop the elevated command chair, which erected in the exact middle of the ship’s rounded bridge room. Bright light fell from the ceiling to add a sparkling glare to the white uniforms of naval officers that filled the room.

The silent humming of electronic circuits and monitors combined with the rapping of multiple fingers on control boards told how the ship and its crew integrated to become one. Captain Peterson was not an old man, but the wrinkle around his eyes would have convinced anyone that he was.

Fifty seven didn’t mean you were just reminded you that you were past middle age. Besides that, Peterson was not the least interested in that Life-drug or elixir as some called it, that old men took these days.

A man like Peterson was always ready to face reality. That was what brought him this far. In the armed forces career practicality was the number one quality a leader needed to have. Which goes on to say that Captain Peterson did not believe in attempting the impossible, and didn’t believe in unnecessary heroics.

Why the rebels of the second Colony-wide war thirty years back lost to the united government was because they were utterly impractical. Peterson remembered one of the stupidest moves by the separatists; they had snuck in a five man team infantry through the rear craft-ports of Folcon dome, on a mission to assassinate the Prime Minister.

When Peterson heard of the move he could not believe how stupid the rebels were. Intelligent reports came in that they had trained those five men from the age of twelve fueling them with overdoses of Life-drug, which scientists claimed would give a young man the strength of two adults by the time he was all grown.

“A bullet’s a bullet, flesh is flesh, and bullet will rip flesh,” had been Peterson’s response when news of it reached his ear. Peterson being a mere petty officer at the time, and occupied with battles in the far eastern domes, had laughed and told his colleagues that the rebels were not going to get past the security doors of senate house 01.

Peterson had been right, “technically” because the rebels never used any of the doors but had stolen and crashed an aircraft into a section of the building and made in through there. Another thing Peterson had been right about was that they were all going to die, because they did “precisely.”

For those who didn’t believe in being practical, the thing had made Peterson a hero once again. His strategy had been very simple, if the Spacing Union had wasted so many years scouring the neighboring systems, painstakingly moving from planet to planet in search of a suitable habitation, all he had to do was make a blind jump to the farther uncharted star systems, touching only the first few planets in his path and moving on to the next system without wasting much time on a particular system.

All he did was come along and make some sense. How in the galaxy did the Spacing Union think it was going to find its planet following a search pattern? Peterson didn’t have to be told that such a thing could only come by mere luck. All he had to do was stretch his luck by reaching further into space. It was the most practical thing he could think of, and it paid off eventually. It took one thousand and five jumps in total, and two and the half straight years in space to locate Planet K-C56.

The mission was quite risk free; the only sacrifices Peterson and his men had offered in their effort was the idea of not indulging in the necessary one month break as other naval and MSU ships did. And also the Linker class was not a traveling ship but a war ship, and wasn’t designed to linger in space for such a long period.

He was on his way home, on his way to Mars with the most anticipated and colossal news of Humanity’s interstellar age. Now he was sure he would be promoted to Admiral of the UMN.

Captain Peterson Everson always liked a clean shave but the darkened shave marks were a telltale part of his lower face. His constantly sleepy eyes were completely contrast to the way Peterson’s mind worked.

“All systems are check sir, she’s ready for the jump home,” an officer turned to address the elevated Captain. “Home?” Peterson scowled down at the officer. His scowl quickly changed to a smile before he added: “Not for long officer Anthony, Planet K-C56 of the Zalcaran system is soon to become humanity’s new home.”

There was an abrupt chatter of satisfaction across the bridge by the officers as they enjoyed the Captain’s statement.

“Initiate jump!” Peterson ordered.



The Ionarc screamed out of hyper-space onto Martian orbit. The twenty seven kilometer-long space station, Augusta, hovered within the red planet’s orbit shimmering across the cruiser’s view-screen. “This is Augusta security grid 332 to cruiser D4-B6554,” a voice crackled over COMM. “you’re welcome home Ionarc...and cleared to go.”

“Ionarc to Augusta,” Officer Anthony spoke in response. “Clearance received, thanks for the welcome, we’re heading planet side.” The cruiser slowly drifted towards the giant red ball which was planet Mars.

Peterson, in the privacy of his quarters, adjusted his cap observing himself in the mirror. He took his time to get all the honorable adornments straightened out. He knew he was going to get one more of those colors that hung on his chest in the days to come. And he knew that the MSU was going to be envious of the navy.

It wasn’t his fault that the Spacing Union always tried to do things in a tiresome systematic fashion. They had checked over a thousand worlds following their scripted Planet Seeker schedule and were not able to find a viable habitation. It was not his fault that he found one in the tiny period of two years. Captain Peterson smiled at his image in the mirror. You’ve just become humanities savior, Pete. And hell you make such a fine hero. There wouldn’t have been a better looking one.



Senatorial Minister Bernadi Perez was seated on a single bench of the narrow anteroom, while Prime Minister Sakki stared out the window at a light dust storm. Even men like Perez who always approved the dictates of the number one leader of the Martian governing body, also held Sakki in contempt in the secrecy of his mind.

He was too weak for the position, was Perez’s opinion. But then he would prefer for someone of Sakki’s nature to be in power rather than any other of the more egotistic individuals of the Martian governing body, who would have loved to be in Sakki’s place. They knew that Sakki was not the type to exert true authority but they just kept up because of his highly flexible and un-adamant nature. And apart from that, he was the choice of the masses.

Minister Perez knew Sakki’s furtive reason for smiling only when he was faced with the general public. He knew that Sakki’s late father, Owatta Frederick, had pressured him as a younger man to quit smiling too much around his fellow leaders, for it gave away hints of weakness. Perhaps his father too must have seen the flaw in Sakki before anyone else, was Perez’s opinion.

He brushed a hand against his ponytail before he spoke: “I myself out of excitement could not get much sleep since the past three days when the news reached me.”

A dim light hung from a single tube on the ceiling of the narrow space. Sakki focused his eyes on the rocky landscape outside from the long window that almost followed the length of the room. It was possible to see the Martian landscape because the Senate house lay at the very northern edge of Folcon dome. The storm on the outside was definitely of no concern to Sakki, rather it was the ponder which State minister Perez stirred in his mind.

“It is an obvious fact which must first be dealt with,” Perez continued. “I too considered it a time of celebration...but then I gave better thought to the whole picture and realized the dangers that come with this new discovery.”

“It is a pity that I could not conceal the news, since it first came to me.” Sakki sadly said. “My mind never went in that direction, I never thought of how the infected populace will react to the development. There is no way we can abandon them on Mars...and there is no way we can take them with us to the new planet. Let us just hope that the news has not reached the public already.”

“Now you clearly see the dilemma,” Perez pointed out. “I smell another civil war, Minister Sakki, if we ourselves have preached non-discrimination of all masses living with the virus, then we are not supposed to behave on the contrary. And better would it have been if it had not recently crept into the southern and eastern states. And the number of people living with the virus across every Martian dome now makes up more than a quarter of the total global you well know.”

Sakki turned to be looking at Perez. “No, Minister Perez, it can not possibly come to that...I mean—-a civil war. The Union has never known peace for a full century and I’ve been hoping that this government will be the one to successfully achieve that. And thirty years is a good sign that we will see it through.” Sakki paused, exhaled loudly before he went on:

“It is that Godforsaken virus. If the scientists had discovered earlier, that the virus becomes active in a person only eight years after infection, instead of the initially assumed twelve, then maybe Minister Schneider and Minister Nunez would not have been infected.”

“Aha, now you see the dangers as I see it.” Perez said. “We both know that Minister Schneider of Kalgara dome is grandson to a late separatist leader.” Sakki shook his head in disagreement as he expressed: “No, Minister Perez, I am just speaking under the notion that it would have been better if two of our leaders were not infected. Evacuation of the planet would have been far less complicated.”

“The son of a separatist has every tendency to one day become a separatist, in my opinion. Especially when something suddenly arises that can stir that separatist ideology.” Perez’s expression showed he was precise about his opinion.

“I know Minister Schneider more than you do, Minister Perez, and he is a good man. He is never the type to be involved in a separatist movement.”

Perez frowned raising a brow. “May I add that Psychologists have determined that judgment of a person’s character from an official relational standpoint comes out often eighty percent false? For this I will advice that we keep our fingers crossed concerning Minister Schneider’s future actions. Or do you think he would not like to set foot on this new planet like everyone else? Men change, Prime Minister...according to the situations they are faced with.”

Turning more resolute and gesturing with an arm which he waved in disapproval, Minister Perez added: “As for those scientists, they always want to sound smart all the time. Even when answers clearly elude them. Just wait a couple of months and they will change nearly all the facts they have gathered concerning the S virus. The virus is highly was I assured by my personal physician...on a blunt standpoint. We can not risk anyone living with it—-Statesmen or not, to come anywhere near the new planet.”

Listen to yourself Bernadi Perez, Sakki thought. You do not in anyway sound like one who is ready to find a peaceful solution to this problem which you have pointed out. Sakki noticed that Perez was waiting a response after his last statement. “That is exactly what we shall plan to achieve of course...” he sent an intense glare at Minister Perez making sure his eyes met with his. “But in the most courteous manner possible.”

Sakki resumed looking out the window before he added: “I know it will be quite difficult, but I am sure there is a way out.” Minister Perez looked to speak in response when a sudden continuous beep halted him.

Sakki raised his left arm pulling down the sleeve to reveal his wrist COMM. Blue dots of light that patterned around the communications device flashed in accordance with the sound. “Yes!” he spoke into it after a click that halted the beeping.

A muffled female voice replied: “Sir, Prime Minister, sorry to interrupt but more statesmen have just arrived and await your presence in senate hall.”

“Very well, I will be there shortly.”
Perez rose as Sakki began to tell him: “Minister Perez, I imagine we will have to leave this most important discussion for a later time.

“Of course—-of course, Prime Minister; lead the way.” Perez gestured an arm at the anteroom’s single entrance. Both men smoothed their shirts to rid unapparent dishevelment, (a thing that was more of a prevalent habit with most statesmen) before they moved toward the door.

On nearing the door which would have opened to non other but the Prime Minister, it slid aside at a simple wave of his hands. Their outing revealed a brighter lit and larger room. To their left was a man busy at a computer console in a broad framed cubicle. Apart from that, the room was seemingly empty save for a door at the end and another to their right.

The forward door which they approached was large and led to the main senate hall. Sakki knew that a great responsibility had just arisen, that required a lot of wisdom on his part. He simply hoped he would be able to speak the right words and make the right decisions, without stirring a separatist insurrection.



The damn planet might as well have been named after me if the navy was not regarded as one body, Captain Peterson thought, standing in the airlock-chamber tube which whirred mildly ascending into the upper sections of the spaceport. The Ionarc had been rerouted on making its way to Fulmar, the small naval compound. The cruiser instead rested on one of Folcon dome’s large docking-bays; a thing that went on to further Peterson’s excitement.

Standing beside him was Commander Lee Chin Lin, a man he would have loved everyone else in the world to behave like.

Commander Lee was second in command of the cruiser Ionarc, and was so loyal to Peterson that he often imitated gestures, quotes, and sometimes attitudes of his. “What do you think Commander Lee,” Peterson said. “I can bet the Prime Minister himself is waiting to receive us on the platform.”

Lee replied: “Undoubtedly Captain, the accomplishment is surely one that carries weight enough to demand Prime Minister Sakki’s welcoming presence.”

“So I thought, Commander.” The floor they stood on quivered lightly to confirm the tube’s abrupt stoppage. The door slid slowly apart with a hiss to reveal the large receiving platform of docking bay 09 of Folcon dome main spaceport. Both men stepped out. The platform was a large enclosure having a high ceiling.

A clang confirmed the arrival of another tube after that which was exited by the naval officers continued in ascension. That would be the tube that carried the Ionarc’s science team leads, Peterson knew. Where’s my welcome party, he thought, looking around the wide platform. Even though he tried to hide it, the sudden surprised scowl that shot across his face was obvious. All he could see was bay maintenance personnel and engineers busy at service stations bulging out of the end-wall.

Their white naval uniforms caught the attention of some of the workers but apart from that, most did not as much as notice their entrance. Peterson was astonished. I just saved humanity!, he screamed at them in his mind. At least if this were Fulmar in ordinary conditions there would have been two rows of naval officers waiting to salute him on entry. Not to talk of when he had just managed to save the world.

Where is my triumphant entry, where is the military, where are the statesmen, where are my honorable handshakes. Is this supposed to be some kind of joke? Peterson felt embarrassed by the statement which he made in the tube some moments ago. One out of three exit-tram doors glared before the approaching men whose boot-steps echoed in the hollow of the interior. The science team-leads made up of three men, followed behind Peterson and Lee at this point.

The Martian spaceports were constructed at the outer edges of the dome habitats but were attached to the domes themselves by tram-tunnels. The cruiser had descended into the lower parts of the huge rounded section of the spoon-shaped spaceport, and the tram-tunnel which the Ionarc’s crew approached led directly to the inner airlock substations of Folcon dome. Still receiving no attention of the workers busy around them, the door hissed open for the Ionarc’s crew to empty into it. The thick odor of hydraulics streamed into Peterson’s nose the moment he was in. multiple light tubes hanging at the high corners followed the extensive length of the tunnel.

Tram vehicles were designed for five passengers, and was perfectly suitable to take them all. Peterson and Lee in front, and the science team taking the back, they all clambered. “Not as much a welcome as we anticipated was it?” Peterson told Lee in a low tone making sure he alone heard him. “I would assume that the discovery may yet be viewed by the government as a claim,” Lee replied. “Until we are able to make proper evidential confirmation.” They strapped themselves in place with the restraints before Lee pushed the “Go” button for the vehicle to speedily squeal away.

Captain Peterson frowned in thoughtfulness. He looked to speak the words to Commander Lee but realized he had to speak loudly against the screeching rails of the tram: Hmm, why would a Planet-Seeker ship pass incorrect information concerning such a grand matter? The united government has always been very pessimistic. They must seem to find the discovery hard to believe.

Looking out the transparent window that ran the entire length of the tunnel, Peterson noticed that a sandstorm brewed on the outside. The squealing of the tram soon reduced to a fading whine as it neared the exit hatch. Hatch groaned open to swallow the tram and its crew releasing them onto the security platform of sub-station 09.

There were the usual security arc-ways and personnel on this side. Peterson almost smiled when he looked beyond the arc-way lasers to have view of a group of military men and two government officials that seemed to await their arrival.

The security lasers buzzed scanning the group of men as they walked through in a straight file. They had barely reached the waiting men when the older looking of the two government officials stretched out a hand. “Captain Peterson Everson,” he said, before Peterson got himself to receive the handshake. With what seemed like a frown, Peterson allowed his eyes inspect the five United Martian Army soldiers who stiffly stood behind, before he leveled his gaze at the man and replied: “Yes.”

“Jacob Barley, chairman of Folcon senatorial delegation,” the man informed. “The Prime Minister demands your immediate appearance at the senate house.” He looked across Peterson’s shoulder and added: “And also a Dr Sydney—-and assistants.”

“That would be me,” the most bearded of the three scientists said with a nod. “Us,” he shrugged in addition.

“Very well then, we should waste no further time.” Mr. Jacob and his colleague quickly turned: “The convoy awaits,” he said. The grim faced military men moving more like robots, quickly split a space between themselves for them to pass. The soldiers followed behind the group of men as soon as the last scientist went past them.

All parked at the edge of the main-road, the convoy was not a long one. Three groundcars and a military zerodrift tank that spurted air at the extreme rear. Not as long a convoy as Peterson imagined. “Gentle men, if you may,” Jacob gestured an arm at the second groundcar whose door slid open to receive the men. “Except for you Captain Peterson,” he informed as Peterson made to head into the vehicle. Commander Lee and the scientists continued into it in a file. “The fleet Admiral awaits you,” Jacob said, pointing at the first groundcar.

The two government officials immediately headed to the third vehicle as Peterson proceeded toward the first. Peterson snapped up a salute standing next to the groundcar’s door which slowly slid open to reveal Fleet Admiral Tobias Oliveira seated in the all white interior. “Step in, Captain,” he beckoned Peterson with a peripheral glance.

“Yes sir,” he obeyed. For the first time Peterson noted how long a time he was gone from Mars, for he thought he saw some extra age lines across Fleet Admiral Tobias’s face. The door slid shut as soon as Peterson was in, and all the bustling night time noises of the metropolis seemed to seize instantly. The single driver who was in front stepped on it and they were on the move. The partitioning board rose to seclude the driver from them, concealing both view and sound.

Being summoned by the Prime minister, and sharing the same vehicle with the highest commanding officer of the naval force better showed that his accomplishment was recognized. Peterson finally started realizing that the government might be wanting to keep a low profile concerning the new discovery. He started realizing that the public may not even know about it yet. No wonder the workers at the airlock sub-station acted with indifference. But then again, what was he thinking? It was the most sensible thing to be done by any government.

Fleet Admiral Tobias was one respected not just by Peterson but by everyone, mostly members of the entire Martian armed forces, and former separatists, who were the ones that had experienced his masterful genius in strategic aerial combat. Master of the skies is what they had branded him after the minor separatist insurrection about a decade ago in the southern regions. In the second colony war that ended thirty years back when Tobias was still a Captain and not the one in command of the navy, the rebel forces had actually excelled in the Martian sky and had won most of the battles during the first phases of the war. And victories in aerial battles almost meant that a side had won a war—-whatever side it was, mainly because aircrafts were the major instruments that protected against dome breaches.

One of the major reasons the united government had won the second colony war was because a young Captain Tobias eventually led a remarkable and coordinated attack on the major separatist dome of Shughast, and had won. That, combined with the concluding gathered efforts of the army and the Dome Guard Corps. It was the battle of Shughast that made him into the hero he was today.

Admiral Tobias was an important man to the UMG. There was even talk by naval officers these days that it was men like Tobias that kept rebels at rest and in hiding among normal citizens. Tobias was a reputable man and Peterson had always aspired to be like him, but with Peterson’s current achievement, he reasoned it would probably be Tobias who would be envious of him.

“A year and five months Captain,” Tobias said, still not caring to look at Peterson. “For one year and five months the force could not make contact with you. Nor the Spacing Union...or any other Planet Seeker ships. And when you finally contact the force, you report that the Ionarc was on its way home, only for us to loose contact with you for another ten months.” He finally glanced at Peterson. “Do you mind explaining that, Captain Peterson?”

Goddamnit, is this how I am congratulated on a job well done? “Sir, the main objective of the—-

“Risking a linker class in space for that long was clearly dangerous, and was not the wisest thing to do. You endangered not just the ship but also its entire crew.”

Peterson tried very hard to keep his face as expressionless as possible.

“Did you not realize that troop six-four of the Ionarc have families back here on Mars?” there was silence.

“I believe my decisions were absolutely wrong sir,” Peterson shot. “You can be sure they were,” Tobias said. “But on the other hand, Captain. If wrong decisions in the long term translate to desired results...” He glanced at Peterson again. “It is only then that such decisions can then be deemed as right.” Facing forward again, Tobias released the words un-excitedly: “congratulations Captain, the navy is mostly proud of you to have accomplished such an enormous task. Should I also add that you’ve just become a hero among heroes, to go down humanity’s reputable history.”

“It is quite an honor, sir,” Peterson stiffly replied.

“That aside, I just received reports of what remains of troop six-four. What exactly did you encounter on this planet K-C56?” The question clearly caused Peterson to shudder. His mind swirled racing back through tracks of memory.

Even though K-C56 was a lavish world where humans could indulge in the luxury a breathable open environment, many still were the things which Peterson and his crew experienced in their short stay.

It had only been their fifth day on K-C56. All the excitement—all the joy, had suddenly ended in terror. Peterson remembered rushing into the bridge. Officer Anthony spoke over the COMM with one of the scientific-data collecting teams. The radio crackled with static: “This is Tango two to control you’re not...believe this...currently looking at a...”

“Tango two—-Control to Tango two, can you read me?”

“Its currently approaching us right now...I read you control. You’re breaking up a bit but I”

“Listen Tango two, what ever it is that approaches you may be hostile.”

“Hey, ah ah, there’s not just one of them...just as curious as we are.”

“I repeat, whatever approaches you may be hostile, we already lost contact with Tango one and Tango four due to a similar encounter.”

“You’re breaking”

“Control to Tango two, you’re advised to retreat or stand your guard.”

The next thing that came over the COMM was screams of pain and abrupt rifle shots. Officer Anthony continued: “Control to Tango two—-come in Tango two. Control to Tango two, can you read me?” The COMM went flat and not as much as static could be heard. Anderson turned his face to Captain Peterson. “We’ve lost them too.”

“Okay that does it, we’re going out after them,” Peterson said, raging out of the bridge. “Wait a minute,” Gibson, the radar operator said. “We’ve got multiple incoming, sir, whatever’s out there has also come for us.” Peterson paused with a deeply startled look on his face.” From where exactly?”

“They’re all over the base of the ship; I think they’re looking for a way in. Wait a minute.” He rapped quick fingers on the control board before him for a holographic simulation of the ship’s interior to spring up from the projector surface. “Oh my God, like I thought. How in the galaxy can they do that?”

Peterson placed a stern gaze on the shimmering blue display, as did every other officer in the bridge. Peterson observed the small dark figures that were making into the ship.

“All entrance ramps are literally flinging open on their own for them to enter,” Gibson shockingly said. “As if they had some kind of overriding device.” He turned to the Captain. “We’re breached sir.”

Peterson’s surprised gaze remained on the holo display. The figures were streaming into the ship’s different decks in a peculiarly organised fashion.

Peterson whirled, moved over and flicked on the ship’s central COMM. “This is the Captain to all decks—-code red—-we have a breach. I want all hands battle ready on the double. Get yourselves armed soldiers, and defend this ship!”

Multiple feet sounded around him when Peterson entered into the armory. One of the officers pushed a button and the bulkheads of the small room began shifting alternately in separate columns exposing weapons. The clattering continued until pistols and rifles had popped up from nearly every single corner making the room alive with arms.

The men were arming themselves and charging out of the armory. Peterson grabbed a BS75 precision rifle, hurried out himself.

In a little while, flanked by two officers and one that took point who held a motion tracker, Peterson was treading along the wide corridors of section B2 of deck three. “We’re getting closer,” the officer with the motion tracker had said. He suddenly slammed himself against the edge of a bulkhead causing Peterson and the rest to also stop.

“They’ll be through that door any second,” the officer said in a desperate tone, sweating trickling down his face. The four men loudly cocked their weapons awaiting the hostiles. The moment the door opened...bright purple flashes of what seemed like bolts of energy—-


“Captain!” Admiral Tobias called before Peterson snapped back into the present. “Oh, what we encountered?”

“Yes...was there life on K-C56?” there was keenness in Tobias’s voice. Peterson exhaled before he answered: “Yes...there was life in many forms. From trees to insects and wild creatures. All in the open, sir.”

“ is quite a finding. And there was no intelligent life?”

“Intelligent, no—-no there was no intelligent life,” Peterson shook head in saying.

“Then what was it that took the lives of up to a third of troop six-four?”

“There were these wild creatures, almost four feet high, moved on all fours. Sharp teeth, razor claws, took us by surprise.”

“How was this possible?” Tobias asked. “Was the entire crew deployed on surface?”

“No sir, but I split a third of the troop into six groups that were supposed to aid the science team in gathering sample material for scientific study, and for protection against the unknown. But as it happened, the men were not able to achieve the aspect of protection.”

“You split a third of the troop into six groups? Just what the hell kind of material gathering required you assigning up to nine officers to what—-how many scientists a group?”

“That would be two, sir. Three officers to two scientists, sir. The rest of the men only went in as reinforcement.”

“And they were all killed by these four foot beasts? Even the reinforcements?”

“Precisely sir,” Peterson firmly answered.

“Hmm.” There was silence again. Tobias seemed to be studying Peterson’s face. “How much spread across the planet were these creatures?” the Admiral asked in addition. Peterson, who still seemed to express nothing, answered more like a robot: “Considering the particular region where we landed the ship, there were lots of them, swarms of them. It was actually due to these creatures that we shortened our stay on planet K-C56. But even so I believe Admiral, sir, as well as I know you do, that these creatures will not pose much of a problem when the force returns to K-C56 better prepared.”

“Surely, Captain,” Tobias sighed. “Such a remarkable finding cannot be hindered by mere wildlife. And nevertheless, as is the old saying, nothing good comes easy. The men of troop six-four who were lost died for a grand purpose and are bound to also go down record history. I have already arranged for a proper and deserving funeral. Their families will be informed by tomorrow, and of course the cause of death will by no means be related to the new planet. The government desires for the finding to remain classified...for the moment.

“Also, if you were going to ask, the ship’s crew has already been informed on this.” Nothing else was said by both men after that, so that the goundcar’s silently droning air-conditioning could be heard. Admiral Tobias spoke after a while: “I have just one more thing to ask, Captain Peterson.”


“On this new can actually inhale air in open environment?”

A small grin finally stole across Peterson’s mouth. “Precisely, sir.”

Thursday, October 1, 2009

Happy Indipendence Day Nigeria!!

Its yet another one of those days that come only once a year. Nigeria's fourty nine today and I'm wishing every single Nigerian and supporters and partners of my great country a very happy Independence Day.

Wednesday, June 24, 2009

Progress Report

So far I don't think Surface K-C56 is going to publish this year after all. I'm busy with a lot of other writing and the thing's coming very slowly. Slowly but remarkably well.

Friday, February 20, 2009

Game Design and Target Market (part one)

Let us begin with the most popular target market of today’s game industry: the casual gamer. By separating the word casual from the context let us try to have an idea of who this people are, or try to understand the true nature of this target market.

Dictionary definition of the word casual: “Not showing much CARE or thought. Not showing that something is important to you.”

So from that simple definition of the word CASUAL we can deduce now that this is a market that does not CARE about games, and games are not very important to it. This means that this market has other forms of entertainment that weigh higher to it, no matter how hard you try to shove brilliant games in its face, it accepts them with a nonchalant attitude.

I like to compare it to a man going after a woman already in love with another man.

This, however does not go to say that this is not a cost-effective market to pursue. This market is the largest target market there is. Nintendo for example, has shown us that it is in fact a very lucrative market. But the effects it will leave on the industry in the end is just as broad as its large customer base.

The present dormant and lacking atmosphere of the game industry is as a result of the pursuit of the casual game market. And it will get worse with time if not immediately addressed.

I also like to compare it to porn. Porn is probably the highest selling genre of film. I want you to imagine the entire Hollywood pursing this very lucrative market.

The result as you know, will turn out to be very insane. It will completely halt creativity. It will destroy the movie industry as a whole, but they’ll be making a lot of money at first.

The same way, I want you to picture the entire game industry publishing similar titles to what Nintendo is doing today. It does not encourage forward movement in terms of true creativity. What Nintendo is releasing today is almost totally 90’s style games. Just relax and take a closer look. It is pulling the industry backwards.

This is supposed to bring us down to the clash of profitability and creativity, a topic that I will leave for another time.

But now we know that pursuing the casual game market ushers in more cash and leads to backwardness in the game industry.

This is the most financially rewarding market, but we have seen its acute disadvantages. Also notice that I’ve kept using the words “forward movement” “Progression”, which is very different from growth in this context.

To increase in size does not necessarily define progress. An Obese man grows in size according to his continuous intake of unhealthy food. That this man is big does not mean that he is healthy. The results of his wrong food intake will only play out in the future.

Just like a healthy man requires a balanced diet to be healthy, in the same way the game industry needs to achieve a balanced system of game development. This I will break down in the following pages.

Now, keeping healthy is something of an effort. You need to accept some practices that are not very pleasurable to you, like exercise, vegetables, etc. The same way the game industry is like an organism, and I care about this organism. There are things I will say, which will sound unpleasant to some in the industry, but I believe they are things that must be said.

There are things I will say which a few may not agree with, but I’ve been following the game industry with an analytical eye. I believe I know what’s wrong and I want to contribute what I can to providing a soultion.

I was going to wait until I’ve proven myself with a shipped game written or directed by me in order to gain the industry’s confidence, but time waits for no one.

Due to the rampant number of casual titles today, there are a lot more people playing games today who weren’t playing games in the past. The game industry may be financially bigger today, but this does not define progress.

Let me give you an example of progress. The last time we had progress in the game industry was in the days of the Playstation debut. I had been playing Street Fighter and Mortal kombat on Super Nintendo/Sega Genesis a lot and there came talk of these new games on arcade. I read about Tekken and Resident Evil and eagerly looked forward to seeing these games.

The day I walked into the right arcade, the first thing I saw was Law pulling off the knuckle grab on Nina…I was dumbfounded, speechless, helpless, and awestricken. That my dear developer, is progress. And then I looked the other way and saw Taki doing a knife grab on Siegfried in a Soul Edge duel.

To prove my point of a stagnant game Industry, what different was the recently released Soul Calibur IV from the Soul Edge of many years ago? What different are games of today from that of those days.

And to return to our original line of discussion, everyone knows that porn is extreme but I can assure you that both casual gaming and hardcore gaming are also extreme practices in their own rights. And the question now comes, if casual and hardcore gaming are extreme then what market should the game industry basically pursue?

The game Industry’s average target market

Notice that I have used the words Game Industry, and not the words Game Developer. It is okay for a 3rd party developer to solely pursue after either the casual or hardcore market, or both.

But a hardware company and 1st party software publisher like Nintendo or Sony pursuing after any of the two aforementioned markets would be totally wrong, as Nintendo is wrongly pursuing the casual market today. You’ll make a lot of money, but you’ll seriously harm the industry in the end.

Now back to our question, what should be the Game Industry’s primary target market?

All these years I’ve always heard game developers mention these two extreme markets and waited patiently for the single normal market to be mentioned…which is the Intermediate Gamer. This now takes us back to our dictionary.

Dictionary definition of Hardcore: “The small central group in an organization or a particular group of people who are the most active or who will not change their beliefs or behavior.”

That definition gives us an understanding of the hardcore gamer. He is the most active. He is unbending and has a very high expectation of games. This gamer is very advanced.

To this gamer, gaming is serious business and is approached very passionately. Also notice the word “small” in the dictionary definition. This is obviously the smallest target market, and at the same time carries the potentials of being the most massive market. I’ll break all this down as we go on.

Just like the casual gamer who will rarely attempt to purchase difficult games because games are supposed to dance to his/her tune, the hardcore gamer will almost never attempt to purchase a too simple/easy game, because games are supposed to provide a high level of challenge/competition. Notice my use of the words “rarely” and “never” in this paragraph.

These attitudes makes this two group of gamers extreme. From our little analysis we can now see that this two target markets are limited, due to the fact that there are certain expectations already printed in their minds, which strongly dictates what they will and will not purchase.

I will now like to mention that the hardcore gamer however, is still the most rigid. A lot more rigid than the casual gamer; which is a negative quality. Remember the dictionary definition of this group: “who will not change their beliefs or behavior.”

But the casual gamer, just like the intermediate gamer, is more flexible, in that he can still easily be swayed or influenced to purchase a hardcore game. If a hardcore game comes out tomorrow and it’s very good, the gaming community will talk about it and promote it.

This will cause both the casual and intermediate gamer to want to check out this game. These two groups have limited knowledge about games so most times they are just following the crowd, they are novices, they’ll go and pick up a game in the store if there’s a buzz about it.

But this does not work in the reverse because the simplistic nature of a casual game alone is enough to completely repel the hardcore gamer. This is why I pointed out the fact that the hardcore market has the potentials of being the most massive market. Because it can carry the entire casual and intermediate market along on special occasions.

This only happens on special occasions because it only takes an outstanding game to do this. Tekken is a very complex game but casual, intermediate, and hardcore gamers alike love this game. I noticed that most casual gamers preferred to use characters like Eddy, with whom you only need to tap random buttons to pull of a streak of crazy moves.

So, ways that the game can be made accessible to the casual gamer can come in many other forms apart from an easy mode setting. Easy to control characters, weapons, items etc are also ways to consider reaching the casual player after the main design of the game has already been achieved.

It is important for us to now take note of the fact that the casual gamer is negatively extreme and has the highest potential of ruining the game industry if given utmost attention; (which is presently ongoing) Whereas the hardcore gamer is positively extreme.

Let me explain this, the hardcore market still manages to foster creativity and progression, thereby encouraging forward movement of the industry. Since the demands of a hardcore gamer are very high and advanced, it pushes developers to work with a more complex and progressive mindset, thereby coming up with new ideas and creative solutions.

The rout to original ideas is hidden deep within the intertwining corridors of the maze called COMPLEXITY. Note that complexity is not actual difficulty, but seeming-difficulty. It’s all about executing a complex game idea in a simplistic manner.

For example, I have a brand new idea for how weapons should be reloaded in shooting games, which would eliminate the one button reload system that’s currently in vogue.

Developers with a casual-game-market mindset would discourage such a thing, stilling any complex sounding ideas from surfacing at all, thereby stalling the progression of the game industry.

Though from my own understanding it is the direction of the IP owners and managers and producers etc, it’s a shame that almost the entire industry pursues after casual gamers today. Again, the clash of profitability and creativity, a separate topic I will address in the future.

Were it like this in the 90’s, games like Tekken and Gran Turismo, Virtual fighter, Tomb Raider, Super Metroid etc would never have surfaced. But these were very innovative and creative games. And judging from the list, these were all intermediate/hardcore titles.

Even though they were complex and challenging, they were still accessible and enjoyable. Most of these games were key in ushering the game industry into its next level at the time.

Giving utmost attention to the hardcore gamer however, means that only highly skilled players will be able to tackle games, (there’s only a few of these people) which would also in the same vein, ruin the game industry, mostly in terms of profit. But this works in the reverse when you develop a hit hardcore title, because you’ll be making far more money than the casual and intermediate market alone could ever generate.

So what makes the hardcore market extreme is that it ushers in more creativity and progression due to its advanced nature, and less finances, which is also not healthy for the game industry.

So what we’re looking for is balance.

I’ll use the example of a hill. If getting to the top of the hill were the goal, the casual gamer sits lazily at the bottom of the hill, the intermediate gamer is balanced at the top of the hill while the hardcore gamer has reached the top of the hill but is descending the other side of the hill.

Dictionary definition of Intermediate: “Having more than a basic knowledge of something, but not yet advanced.”

It’s a very ordinary definition for a very ordinary group of gamers. This market is not by any means the largest market and because of its ordinary nature is invisible to the eye. This target market is just slightly bigger than the hardcore market.

Anything extreme tends to stick out or protrude which is why the focus has always been on the casual and hardcore markets. While the intermediate market is balanced in the middle, the other two lean to opposite directions.

I’ll use the illustration of three men walking into a reception for a job interview. One of them is tall and is putting on a jacket and shorts and has a crazy haircut.

The other is a midget, while the third is your every day guy in a suit. Now anyone that walks into that reception immediately notices the tall guy and the midget; why? Because they are out of the ordinary, they are extreme. The every day guy in a suit will only be noticed when it gets to his turn for the interview. This has been the case with the Intermediate Gamer.

As a writer and game designer that I am, and prospective developer, I know that I am a hardcore gamer. It is of course not a shameful thing. But this fact actually affects the way I design games, but because I am conscious of it, always want to see from the intermediate gamer’s point of view whenever I do my game designs.

So as a game designer, it is important to know what kind of gamer you are, and learn to adjust your mind while you design games. Although every designer should be able to design a game that appeals to the intermediate gamer, I highly discourage something like (which I know is ongoing) getting a mentally hardcore designer to write a casual game.

They’ll mess it up. Call someone like me to design a casual game and you’ll almost be throwing away your money. All this talk about a designer being able to multi task and tackle different genres of games is quite wrong. But there may be rare cases, though. This branches us into a new topic.

Wednesday, January 7, 2009

Invader: surface K-C56

I'm hard at work on the book right now, and I'm excited by every other page I complete. To me, a far better book than the first.

The story actually kicks off from exactly where Invader ended. So now we get a look at the battle on space station Augusta, what happens to Rhozeo at vector X, and the nature of Hassan's next mission.

Unlike the first book, Invader: surface K-C56 will be a more action packed read. Infact, even the prologue is an action run.

So if you read the first book and you thought there should have been more action, you're in for loads of it in this sequel, and a few good suprises and unraveling to go with it.

I don't want to reveal much anyway. I'm quite positive surface K-C56 will be out this year, I'll let you know as soon as I'm done and my publisher has provided a publication date.